pAgmAmAyAbAng LaNG...

well, i'm in the mood for bragging so just seat tight and read quietly. (hahangin na)

THIS is my greatest poem yet:

Unreal Reality

(well, title pa lang malakas na ang dating...)

When all you can see is blindness

When all you can hear is silence

When all you can feel is numbness

When you love you kill

When you live you die

Don't be scared

Don't feel weird

Don't dare to pinch yourself

Thinking that you are dreaming

Cause you're not

You're awake

Wide awake

All you nees to do now is open you're eyes...

>applause<

so? is it nice? actually, i wrote that, i think...a year from now for the school paper. it really isn't supposed to be that way. it should end like: "just pinch yourself cause you're dreaming..."

something like that. but then my teacher said that it would be more 'poetic' and realistic if i'd end it exactly the opposite way meaning: "you're not dreaming, you're wide awake...blah,blah,blah..."

and i guess my teacher IS right. it came out to be more...hmmm! i can't think of a word to describe it! basta, you get the drift naman right?

so, i guess this is where my bragging ends. that's all i've got to brag about. heheh. just kidding.

keep smiling ;)